|Reviews for Delayed Death|
| HeartKnowsMore26 9/6/11 . chapter 1
I love your story!
| lulu halulu 4/21/09 . chapter 1
I'm sad Sasuke died but it was a nice story anyway.
| kitsunecoyote 3/23/07 . chapter 1
I like it alot! Are you going to continue? Please do so!
| Essyllus 3/9/06 . chapter 1
Props on your excellent endings, though the semicolon fragment ["his life ended"] was sort of unnecessary. I found the sequence of events somewhat confusing, yet that may be because I read too fast.
Some cliches to avoid:
Sasuke's "obsidian eyes"
| PrincessAmy-and-Blueberry 1/10/06 . chapter 1
I loved it so much. but the ending was so ...sniff.
| Sakura-Girl 2005 10/25/05 . chapter 1
This was so sad. I like how you ended it, even though Sasuke died.
| Zhblj 10/16/05 . chapter 1
a nice story... but sad one...
| freakenout 10/15/05 . chapter 1
omg noo sasuke died, bro sakura could have healed some of the wounds he had. xDD.
| Hersheys Rocks 10/15/05 . chapter 1
really really sad *sniff sniff* but it was really good
| Dark Angelic Kitty 10/15/05 . chapter 1
aww soo sad...but good! keep it up!