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StoryGirl83 2007-04-21 . chapter 1
I just finished watching Seasons One and Two of Tru Calling. I was sorry to see it end. I could see the show going this direction eventually had it continued on. I got to the point (by the season one finally) that I couldn't stand Tru, Harrison, and Merideth's father, but Jack confused me. I like how you portrayed him.
finkpishnets 2006-12-21 . chapter 1
I said I'd leave you a review ;) I was just going through and re-reading all of your TC stories, and realised that I'd read every one of them before and been naughty and not left reviews *cringe* Anyway, this series is absolutely fantastic - and we can both do the 'Richard is a bastard' dance together *grin*

We need to have a Tru/Jack revolution and reinstate the passion for them as a couple since, well, they rock. I definitely need to write more TC fiction now :)

*love*
Habita 2006-11-25 . chapter 1
Awesome fic! Different and really original. I loved it! :-)

Thanks for sharing, Cherry!
Millenium Ring and Winchester 2006-10-27 . chapter 1
Well, this has to be my what? 11th Tru Calling fic i've read in one night. I liked this. I actually thought she had died and wasn't coming back. Way to get me worried. I thought it was sweet when he asked "What made you decide?" and she replied "You did." Talk about romantic and lovely or what? So, yeah i liked it.
Natalie 2006-04-30 . chapter 1
oh my,Lara. You really know how to write a perfect fanfic. LOVE IT :D
Amethyst Blizzard 2006-03-22 . chapter 1
Ooh, yes. LOVED the whole 'going back' thing from the beginning with Jack at the hospital. It really offered something different from most stories I've read. And how you fed it slowly and in little bits, too. Great job.

I loved how you wrote Tru and Jack together. It shows that they care about each other but know they shouldn't. Good stuff. And Richard...evil, evil man.

Ooh and what I liked most about this is that Tru died...but only for a few minutes. And I liked how Jack was reason she was brought back. Much to like. Yes indeed. Good job!

Peace
Razor to Rosary 2006-03-19 . chapter 1
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever seen! It was LouisaB who recommended your stories to me on her TC forum, because I am a huge Tru/Jack fan. I'm so glad I found your story, I absolutly loved it! You write wonderfully, and it's not confusing at all. I can't get tired of saying how wonderful it is!

Keep up the awesome work!

Ari
LouisaB 2006-02-19 . chapter 1
Finally got around the reading this. Sorry it took me so long.

I see what you meant now about writing this differently to the last one. I personally found it a little difficult to read with it going backwards but that is just a personal preference of mine - I find flashbacks in movies and books irritating whilst I know that a lot of people don't. That being said it did flow a lot better than some novels I have read that use the flashback method.

They were opposites who were as different as day and night, fire and ice and stood between the bleeding boundaries of Destiny and Fate.

This line I absolutely loved. Just had to mention that.

And I liked the ending with meeting Fate and making the choice. Was a little surprised that Tru didn't realise that Richard was responsible for her mother's death though. Are you going to pick up on that in another story.

As you know I am not a big Tru/Jack shipper but the story did work very nicely. Good job.
Cassandra Lange 2006-02-10 . chapter 1
This is fantastic! I love it, especially the flashback strategy, very effective. Damn Richard. I love the near-death experience too; you've tantalized just the right amount with the info you gave on the calling. :) I think one of the key aspects of your style is your ability to use semantic opposites to paint a picture that would otherwise take paragraphs - I loved the phrase "bleeding boundaries of Destiny and Fate" - simply beautiful.
Turtle2 2006-02-04 . chapter 1
Whoa, dude. That was intense.
That must've been hard to do, writing backwards like that, but it definately worked. I also applaud your courage in exploring the subject of PTSD. It's a hard one to do, and something lots of writers won't touch, but you did very well. Nothing's going to be okay just like that when her dad just tried to kill her. Nice job.
So when did Tru stop wanting to beat Jack's head in and start wanting to jump his bones?
LadyJaye 2006-02-02 . chapter 1
Hey there, I remember you from before. I really enjoyed this story, had to read it a couple of times to get it but I really like the style. Going backwards instead of forward was really good, and probably a bit more difficult to write. Good job, onto the sequel.
BuffyandAngel4ever 2006-01-08 . chapter 1
oh thats was a great story! hurray for Tru and Jack!

I wish there was more storys with them together!

:)
Steph 2006-01-04 . chapter 1
I loved it, and I haven't even seen the show yet! Keep it up!
krystalmaze 2005-12-17 . chapter 1
this story was great ^_^
yes it was ver understanable
i really loved it
asianpearl 2005-12-15 . chapter 1
aww... that story was so sweet. I wish the tv series could be like that. Heck, I wish all boyfriends could be like that. Keep up the good work.
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