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| BeautyFiend 2005-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseawesome story...i love the way it was written...and that it was in Jay's point of view... -Taryn |
| idontknowanything 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseExcellent one-shot. I could really feel how pathetic Jay thought he was, and how he really feels about everything that happened. I think you were pretty true to his character,also, not making him all sappy and sentimental, but at the same time, giving him actual feelings. Excellent one-shot. |
| xxflychica88xx 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseWow this is a good one-shot...I hope you really do a story about this..it would be good. You've caused me to add you to my story alert list...lol |
| fluffymello 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abusenice1 i loved it! i hope u update soon! |
| xenasargo2 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseOK...I usually hate Jay, but once in a while, he does something that makes me hate him less...But that hasn't happened since he took advantage of Emma in Secret. This is REALLY good because it captures Jay very good. How he might feel now, and I STILL hate him...but maybe just a little less after reading this. (lol) I like how you don't write that he "loves" Emma because it just seems like a crock coming from a guy like that. Anyway...Very well written, and I hope you continue soon. |