woah. Peter Pan is freaking awesome in this! A bit too mature, but that's ok! Even though it's been like 2 years, please update soon!

peter is way, way, WAY too mature. he speaks too well. but othe rthan that its awsome.

This is absolutely brilliant! Please, please, please, comoe back to this! Update please :)

Are you going to update this story?
I really like it.

Good Story! I Want To Know If Hook WIll Go Back On HIs Deal?
Please Keep WrItIng!
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Hi, ya!
I was on your website and I read this and decided to reveiw! Though I don't believe the website had a chpt 3... hm...
Anyways, you've got me interested! I've never read a PP fanfiction! (Didn't think there was a possible slash pairing in it so I didn't check. Shame on me!) I really like it so far, even though my minds like "Wait! Who's that again?!" and "So, wait... does that mean that that's really...?"
Been to long since I've seen Peter Pan! ^_^
So, I think you should continue it! YAY! FOR YOU!

-Alika613

Are you going to update this story again? It is really good and I have not seen a YYH/Peter Pan crossover before and I really want to see how it turn out. This is a really good story and I hope you update it soon.

WOW!So who's with who?And hows YYH gonna weave into this?I'M CONFUSED!Oh yeeh...awesome story!

Please update, I've never read a YYH/PP story before.

It's an ok story. Your grammer is good, paragraphs are good. The plot itself is a little sluggish, you need to engage the reader more and encourage them to continue reading.
I've got no problems with the pairing, slash fiction is a favourite of mine.
However, Peter Pan can't grow up, that's his thing. All children grow up, except one. That's the fundemental thing about Peter. Anyway, keep on writing!

O! I am really interested in seeing where you're going with this!! Loving it so far!

The pairings that you have chosen... one word- SICK. The only thing I liked about this story was the choice Hook was given. Please don't continue this story.

Please update this soon. I want to see Hook's response. Plus, will the captain get to meet Pan's family?