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| Sexy Neko Hibiki 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abuseOh! Write more dude! This is just so god a fic!^_^ |
| angel61991 2008-07-01 ch 8, | abuseinteresting please update soon. |
| taxzombie 2008-06-26 ch 8, | abuseJust finished reading your story to date. It was a fun read. I appreciate the way you handled the taming scenes, it reminded me of the old horror flicks, you knew what was happening but you never saw it. Nicely done. The opening scene was a good setup, it grabbed by interest and pulled me into the tale. What followed was never boring, a good flow at all times. Thank you for posting it. |
| Reform Joms 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abuse"I know it is near impossible to write a pokégirl story that is not a lemon, but I have taken the challenge, and I am winning." True, you write a good story without having to have any lemon in it. Reminds me of 'A New Life' a Naruto/Pokegirl xover. It's a really good story, no lemons, but still good. In fact, there are actually Pokegirl xover stories here in FFnet that are good with lemons. But most of them are like crap: uber-powered heroes, choppy plot, and nothing but random sex. Both this fic and 'A New Life'-'s main characters (Ranma and Naruto, respectively) are very powerful, but not overly so that they can easily take down a Legendary. Crap, I'm rambling... (;>w |
| keichan2 2008-06-25 ch 8, | abuseI hesitated for a while about how Usa would humiliate Mason... Assemble a terribly powerful team to crush his? Crush his team with only ONE pokegirl? I even thought about using only supposedly weak pokegirls... But using pokekit... My god! I KNOW they will win, and I can't wait to read the fight! Please! Update soon! |
| AMWOOD co 2008-06-25 ch 8, | abuseYeah! An update! An update! Ah, good pickup. Okay, next time - ACTION! Right? You're not going to drag this out like NNFD, right? RIGHT?! Good, as long as we're on the same page (ps. I'm cranky and going to bed. It's 9:30 AM and I work midnights fulltime, sorry if I'm rude). From the offices of AMWOOD co ps. No I'm not. |
| NovaBladeZ 2008-06-24 ch 8, | abuseAnother chapter! Good to hear from you again. Can't wait for the fight between Ash and Ranma. I wonder if Misty is part of his harem or if she is still a human trainer somewhere. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Blood Of Odin 2008-06-23 ch 8, | abuseYeah, another fun one from one of my fav writers on this site. I had forgotten how much sheer fun this story was to read. No concentration on the sex, but lots of characterization and story make it fun to read and think of. Not to mention that he has about 2 story lines running. The main and the underlying story are both beginning to get fleshed out. Can't wait to see the next part. |
| Kinoshita Kristanite 2008-06-23 ch 8, | abuse"You get used to it." Classy. |
| Tama Saga 2008-06-23 ch 8, | abuseI'm a bit surprised that Ash's pokegirl can't speak in an understandable tongue like all of the other pokegirls. On the other hand, I think it's a nice touch, since we don't have to suffer through made-up dialogue. |
| James Axelrad 2008-06-22 ch 8, | abuseits a fun chapter. |
| dogbertcarroll 2008-06-22 ch 8, | abuseI'm looking forward to the beatdown! Loved the ending line. Shinji was just so... shinji-ish. How tough are the pokekits at this point? I'm also wondering if with her connection Hotaru could evolve in battle. Just a thought. |
| Wonderbee31 2008-06-22 ch 8, | abuseGood part here, and really liked the buioldup for the next match, as well as Ranma's next big challenge, and cool to see that Ash is a relatively nice guy here, and that Peekabu for him stays the same really. |
| Bobboky 2008-06-22 ch 8, | abusesweet |
| Story Weaver1 2008-06-22 ch 8, | abuse'Ash Sexum' well it makes more sense than 'sextoame' Maroum's monologue at the beginning was quite interesting, and I like the duality of the newests challngers. LOL! at Rise;s eplainstion for their quick learnin cursce. I can't just hear Ranma saying that |