A great story. I liked the part where the person got stuck in Sara's closet.

ew what a creep, he is a stalker ! mg he looked at her underwear !

Greg Sara hottness.

Loved it.

that was good, luvin it,carry on wiv more stories plz!

Hey, great story! I like the way it flowed. :)

I liked it but it should have been the other way around; Greg in the closet and Grissom and Sara together

Er... this wasn't funny. This was more like angst. Actually, it has no genre. Which is pretty effing cool, but it definitely isn't actually humor or romance. :P

Romance/angst?

Jesus, what's wrong with you? That wasn't funny nor romantic. Just...stalkerish. And slightly homicidal. If this is your idea of humour, your angst must be illegal.

Jesus, what's wrong with you? That wasn't funny nor romantic. Just...stalkerish. And slightly homicidal. If this is your idea of humour, your angst must be illegal.

Oh MY GOD! That was soo freakin hilarious once you know who it is. I breathed in so fast i started coughing. Haha that was nicely done and completely unexpected. Great job. You should continue with this.

I liked it! It was kind of funny, you know? How he is so in love with her and he has to watch greg and sara do "the nasty." (haha) He should have just jumped out naked and joined the party.

Just what I wanted Grissom to witness...Sara making love with other person, take note, OTHER PERSON BUT HIM! Nicely done! Keep it up!

LOL

That's so mean - and I absolutely like it! Hehe. ;-)

I have to admit that I did not find this either humourous nor romantic. It's kinda sad and creepy. I do however find the choice of songtext interesting.

yay a story tat isnt like all the others! it was rele gd!