Okay this plot is just too weird for me. I mean the whole thing with Rogue gaining the powers/memories of that AoA Rogue I just don't like, it's just reidiculous to me but that's just my opinion and perdaon tasts about that.

I mean even for comics/Fan Fiction that's too unbeleivible for me. And please tell me you're not hooking this Rogue up with that Joseph guy (besides the point that character was considered by most fans just a bad idea in the comics)I hated how in AoA she was with Magento the guy was old enough to be her father for crying out loud what where they thinking? Oh well the only good things I liked out of AoA were Blink and X-Man.

And if that is Blink her name is Clarice NOT Clarence. Plus if you wanted to do a character named Odessa it might have been better if you have just either made up an OC with that name or just had THAT preson come through on whatever caused this instead of all those people. This is just too nuts and too many things going on for me to like it.

I've tried to like this I really have but in all honestly this doesn't read like a serious fic more like one of those bizzare story ideas that most people tend to ignore. I'm not sure if this is harsh and I'm trying not to flame this it is writen well (spelling and gramer) but I just don't like the plot/story you got going for this. It's too unbelivable for me I'm sorry but that's how I feel about this fic.

well I have to say after reading the first two chapters, this thing is way to cluttered. Their are a lot of details left up in the air and it makes this story hard to swallow. While scrapping it or rewriting it does seem harsh, it could make the story better.

damn Agent-G that was a harsh review

i dont think deathsheadx deserved that one. sure its a little cluttered but was it that bad? that in your opinion it needed a rewrite or scrapping?

i kind of liked it i guessed who odessa was the moment the chronal clones were revealed, well i knew it had to be one of the ororo clones Ororo and Odessa both begin with O.

i also dont get whats wrong with tabitha and wanda being friends...

anyway my review is this:
The story is a little cluttered in the begining i.e there was no need for gi-joe it adds nothing to the story in my opinion but overall i enjoyed the story so far, i like the way you have included some of the comic universe into the evo universe.

also is this a joint marvel/dc universe? you've mentioned green arrow, wonder woman and wonder girl

i'm not one for posting reviews but this i had to respond to.

pay no attention to Agent-g. his review was one long rant he spent time pointing out non existant problems with this story*(i mean forgetting to capitalise names? he makes it sound like you do it for every sentance, characters out of character? its fiction.of course the writers voice is going to be different than that of the show) just because he didnt like the story doesnt mean the ideas are bad or its not well written.

it especially doesnt mean you should scrap it!

i didnt find it busy, i enjoyed the ideas you set up and cant wait to see them come to fruition i enjoyed it as i have enjoyed your harry potter xmen evolution crossover and lost. i enjoyed it like i enjoy red witch's fiction and i anxiously await the next chapter of rise of odessa

Okay I read the first chapter awhile ago but I didn't like it, so you've asked and I tried again but after this 2nd chapter that's it for me.

Sorry but there's just so much I don't like. For instance you should say this is AU since this takes place in the 3rd season. Plus you need to fix a few things like you keep making certain characters without captial letters at the start of the name, you do this a lot.

Plus there are a few things like Elizabeth only had powers in that AoA comics not in the main ones, she was human in that. I don't like that all of a sudden Rogue just gets those new 'Miss Marvel' powers out of nowhere. Also that Tabitha rejoined the Brotherhood I didn't like either.

Plus several of the characters just seem off in how you write them honestly. Like Wanda being all friendly to Tabitha all of a sudden. That whole thing with the super soldier formula in X23 is too much as well as the end of this. You got too much going on at once it'stoo busy plus several of these plots are kind of bad ideas like that thing at the end of this chapter, X23 etc.

In all honestly I say scrap this and start over with a lot of changes or try a new story. Sorry if this isn't what you want to hear but I honestly just don't like this fic.