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| metaphor 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseOuch. That was painful. So well done. So true to them both. Thank you. |
| Irina89 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseGod, I love it. I just hope it never happens. |
| anonymous 2005-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseKilling Irina Derevko is wrong. |
| SolitarySoldier 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse"...and thinks about how much he hates Milo ** Rambaldi." LOL. Sorry, but that made me laugh. Great story. Agh, you made me cry! Keep up the good work; this was awesome! |
| Ridan Rose 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuse*cries* Well written. You've captured Jack and Irina quite well, and the flashbacks are really nicely placed. Good work! |
| jracklesfan77 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abusegod that was sad. short but emotionally packed. well done and thank you for sharing |