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| tidbit2008 2007-10-26 ch 1,  | abuseSadness :( Nicely written, thanks for sharing! :) |
| Catherine4 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuse"it didn’t have you missing your best friend so much you couldn’t breathe." :( ^ Best line. Aww, that's sweet! |
| Tricki 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a powerful story. The characters were so well portrayed and I love Stella trying to shoot Mac and then threatening that she would never let him touch her again - I can completely see that happening. You're an excelent writer! Tricki |
| CalleighWolfe (TalkCSI) 2006-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh por Dios (OMG) that was very good! But sad at the end! Keep on writing (another stories of course :D). |
| Caramelchan 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseAww killed in action. Endings overrated. Aww |
| licorice80 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. This brought tears to my eyes. Bravo. It's beautiful. |
| mj0621 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI have this uncertain heart jumping...what's the reason? this fic! NICE ONE! love the threathening part..lol |
| Little Miss Sorrow 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseMy head spins and my eyes burn. |
| Volonta forte 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI can so see Stella threatening Mac when she's pregnant and in labor! Haha! That is so Stella! Loves it! Keep posting! |
| JacobedRose 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. It's nicely put together both happy and sad, 'bittersweet' as I think you put it. |
| sHiaN 2005-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseuhh.. pretty cool... but really OOC.. |
| Belligerent-road-pylon 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseOh sweet lord. THE ANGST. I love it. |
| Tink_05 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, SO SAD! But I liked it. Will be back for more of your fics. |
| Remote Control Princess 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was brilliant! So sad, but an enjoyable read. I like how you've compacted their whole relationship into a short fic. Its funny how you can feel as if you've experiences it all with her, even if it is relayed in a such way. I have to agree with the others, when they mention about tenses and POV. But awesome nonetheless :) Becs x |
| Cyclone2 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was really good. I enjoyed the way you connected their entire history to the 'middle phase' of their relationship. The only thing I'd keep an eye on is your tense and POV switches. It can tend to get a bit confusing when you switch. Otherwise, great job. :) |