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equineamity
2008-08-04
ch 4,
abuseNice kissing scene :p
Very intense!

:)

`equineamity.
Polly
2006-12-31
ch 2, anon.
abuseI said i better write this b4 i read on,i like it so far but if this is going 2 b Horatio and Calleigh i'll scream,it's just plain WRONG people!
Leatah
2005-12-21
ch 5,
abuseReally love the "love" scene, but I do wonder about being shot in the shoulder, its going to really hurt and be very uncomfortable...so is it just me? I would like to see more, like where they go from here...Thanks
ayesha-s
2005-12-11
ch 4,
abuseplease continue, great story.
Leatah
2005-10-28
ch 4,
abuseoh heavens no...keep going...this is really getting good...its so sweet...thanks
Lanta
2005-10-27
ch 4,
abuseAww, very romantic. Good chapter, although you do need to proof read better, there were quite a lot of obvious typos. I definately think that you should do another chapter :-)
99 CDN
2005-10-27
ch 4,
abuseI loved it...just the right amount of fluff aw please continue

Love Brit
leetah
2005-10-19
ch 3, anon.
abuseoh this is so good...butleave it to the dr waking in at the wrong time...gr...can't wait to read more...Thanks
LovexHurtsxBad
2005-10-19
ch 3,
abuseyay! You make me happy. stupid doctor... they always interrupt.
99 CDN
2005-10-19
ch 3,
abuseAW it's so beautiful ((wipping at a tear rolling down my cheek)) i was a little disapointed when the doctors came in though...they ruined the moment! great as akways!

Luv yah
Brit
99 CDN
2005-10-19
ch 2,
abusealright that's really scary...ehat are you trying to do give me a heart attack! * * * * *

Luv yah
Brit
Leetah
2005-10-18
ch 2, anon.
abuseoh...this is really good...can't wait toread more...soon..Please...Thanks
LovexHurtsxBad
2005-10-18
ch 2,
abuseplease write faster! On all of your stories!! You're one of my favorite authors. I will die if i don't read more.
jessi
2005-10-18
ch 2, anon.
abusevery exciting!
but make sure Cal stays alive please!:P
LOL
x
Jessi
livelovelaugh=LIFE
2005-10-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease continue this! somehow i know its gonna be good..ΓΌ
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