I think it was very nice. I usually dislike rhyming poetry because people tend to use the first rhyme that pops into their head and it usually doesn't make much sense, but this is great! This is definately the best rhyming poetry I've read for quite some time.

That was beautiful.

-Nightmare1

Wow, this is really good! I feel kind of stupid though...I didn't notice the thing about the brides and so I thought it was dealing with Dracula and Van Helsing(I heard somewhere that they were father and son? And so I was like, 'Hm, I guess this is a take that Dracula missed his son so much even if he was killed by him and got amnesia.') Then I read the AN thingy at the top and was like 'Oh. Opps. Well thats cool too.' Anyway. I really enjoyed it :)