I loved this story, though I usually prefer the 'Rose is alive' theme. Nearly made me cry.

At least, until I saw the line, "In times of need Redwall Abbey will know Martian." I laughed so hard, imagining Matthias babbling in some incoherent, otherworldly language.

Well done indeed!

I always cry with martin/rose fica. And I'm a guy!

Aw. That was sweet. I really wish Martin could stay with Rose, but you're right, then Redwall would never have been built! Such sweet sadness...

Nice, but his name is spelled Martin, not Martain.

hm s'good

wow, thgat was really good!

loved it:)

Mm, I remember reading the RedWall series and Martin being one of my favourite characters. Just 'cause he was a mouse with a sword. Anyway, this was well written and a entertaining mini-fic to read. Can't say I see any errors of which bug me, so good job!

By the way, this is the girl who sat next to you in english last semester D You know who I am. I bugged you about getting a lower test score than me on "The Pearl" because you studied and I didn't even read the book. :3 In your face.

-lonely bloodied rose

What the hell, stop calling him "Martian"!

WOW, that was amazing!

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rosefall

This atory was incredible! It made me cry; I loved it!

I saw a lot of 'Martian' the warrior in here.

I have to say that over all this was an excelent shot. Good job!

I liked this story very much. It was a very fitting end for Martin. There were a couple misspellings, but they were minor. My only suggestion is that the transition from 'reality' to Martin's dream/death was a bit abrupt. I guess I expected to see more of his passing from the point of view of those he left behind.

Other than that, it was very good!

i used to read the redwall books back in fifth grade...*sniffles* Marlfox was my favorite...good work on the story! good choice of words!

Wow, that was a beautiful story! Although there were many spelling and punctuation mistakes, it was still a pleasure to read. )

Gosh, I sound stuffy and proffesional. x_X