this was very good. at first when she was talking abuot you i wasn't sure who it was but i eventually found out. again great job keep writing.

Whoa... that was deep.

that was really sad pleasae update it's really good

That was brilliant. The repetition didn't make it boring but enhanced your story's outline.

I really enjoyed reading this.

Keep up the writing.

excellent!

damn..that was awesome. haha i can't think of anything else to say. great job!

wow this was an amazing chapter/story. are you going to update? lOVE It. Christine

I love it. You have a way with words, I could feel their emotions. Take care. Bleeding Hearts Club

i'm usually a very talkative person, but that just left me speechless. woah.