Gosh... I read this again and again... *sigh* Its so... fhnfnghfdnoh! I cant express it!! lol!! We've, no, YOU have gotten so far!! Goodness gracious!! XD! Freakoing A, I am so happy! lol! :} This is just so awesome, its always tingling under my skin!! ^^_^^

so I reveiwed your awesome story and saw no mistakes, no typos, nothing wrong with it and loved the great plot you put into it. Hope you write more soon!

And this story is so awesome...

and I'm kind of bored...

because you and your story are worth it...

and the sake of such a gret story...

and started typing for your sake...

and so I got onto a computer...

you could really use some more...

so I just thought that...

You don't have enough reveiws for such a great story...

OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD! WHEN BALMUNG SAID THAT I WAS LIKE O.O WTF?!?!?! NO!! NOT MY ACCOUUNT! :'( XD! Totally awesome! I love it! Skin tingling! Tear swishing! Eye twitching!! Knuckles throbbing to hit Shi!! XD!! Thats all I can say!! XD! LOVE IT!

Wow, man... I never expected that out of Balmung. It kinda smacks you in the face with how spontanious it seems to be. I liked it though, nonetheless. Keep it rolling is all I have left to tell ya.

Love the southern old lady accent, hopefully more than me will review, but I think you won't find a reveiwer who likes your story more than me! Update soon, unlike last time (What took you so long?)!

Ah! Cliffhanger no! Please update fast, I want to know more about the story. Some suggestions for decsribing people, describe them with motion like; her blue skirt blue softly in the wind when she attacked the black panther. Of course no one in your story is wearing a blue skirt, but yeah, you get the idea. and you can also use it for emotions, his eyebrows raised everytime he looked at me when I did something bad. Idk, use or don't. Their just suggestions. But here's one you should follow:Hurry up and finish the chapter! I want to read more! LOL