YEAH.
I love this one. A hell of a lot better than the last one (Which I really loved).
Like you said, alot slower, and there's more action.
Rah. I love it.
Sque, Here's Balmung!
:] Beautifu; job, as always.! ^^

I dont know if I left a comment for this chapter..
Rahh, I LOVE it. :]] X3 Especially the ending. x]

This story is the shit. You are the shit. :)