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| 2ndChild 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAww thats so cute i luv the ending! XD |
| jayma 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI've probably written a review already (and if I didn't then shame on me, hehe). I love this story...it's the cutest thing. It's so well written. ^_^ It's nice to go back to these fics and enjoy the DnA chemistry. I miss Aiden...but beautiful story ^_^ |
| Damhnait 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseaw that was cute. very well done. one of the better DnA short fics i've read in a while :) |
| Remote Control Princess 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant. Heartfelt, truthful and beautiful. Characterisation was down to a T aswell. Keep 'em coming! Becs x |
| jd burns 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseNice tribute to Aiden. I really liked this one. :D |
| Caderyn 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is the first DnA fic I read after I quit because I was too heart-broken about Aiden, and I gotta say, WELL DONE! I think you've pretty much written the best case scenario after Aiden left. Remember when Danny said, "you're lucky we work together..." when he saw her head off at the end of 1x19? Well, now that they don't, they can actually date! So yay, good job of portraying it here. And I love the little insight into Lindsay. "She's not you" -> aw... I personally interpreted Danny giving Lindsay a hard time on her first day as him showing loyalty to Aiden, so yeah, your fic fits perfectly with that. Well done! Don't think you need to continue this (though you can if you want to), it's perfect as a standalone. |
| lily 2005-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw... this has gotta be my favourite 'after aiden leaves' story! i so can imagine this happening. Sniff... i keep wondering y my fave leading ladies leave my fave shows.. It used to be maeve in sinbad, terry in numb3rs, aiden... enough with my rambling! i sure hope that u can think of some kinda continuation to this story =) |
| hyacinthian 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI think you have a nice plot line here. It's a bit underdeveloped, but you have a good base, and you can certainly spin things off of that. You might want to do a self-proofread, because some of the things in the beginning don't really make sense, and you lack some end punctuation in some points. Other than that, you did all right. |
| Etapa 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseAiden and Danny really looked cute together, it's too bad Vanessa Ferlito decided to quit. As someone said already, I hope that is as close as to what the "behind-the-scenes" would be for those two (I mean, at least the job is not between them anymore, no?). A very sweet fic, I loved it. |
| ur wrst nitmare!!! JK LOLZ!... 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseomfg teh storiez iz lyke teh sex0rz nd im lyke, omg linsy iz teh bich nd itz lyke yd aidan hav 2 leav??/??/?? LoLz!1 but i lyke lurved ur stori nd u shud totly rite mor!1 |
| EllaJ 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI loved it.. :D |
| Sarcastic Realist 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseAw... that was sweet. Good job. |
| everclaire 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThats so cute! |
| sarahsoph 2005-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseOk, that is brilliant! I think you've captured them both perfectly. |
| bookwormmel 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseHey! It's Mel :> That was a great story. "Lindsey would never be the woman whose place she was occupying now, but the woman herself was in his arms, a better place than just by his side." That would have to be the sweetest line of the whole ff! It was a nice story, a nice pace and not over the top. Lets hope that is really whats happening! |