I really liked this story. at first, I was thinking "how well does tis girl know Bastard!" Because of Yoko and D.S., But your idea was very good. Hehe, I was thinking that if i was Arshis, i would be devastated at Schneider wanting a child, even if with someone else. But, through and through, i really liked this fic.

Eh...s'alright.

This is really good, I Love Bastard!

There aren't very many fanfics out there with them, and to see this one was a surprise and a joy.

Keep it up

Very good. I liked it .

Wow, I think this is the first Bastard fic I've read (aside from the crossover I wrote). I can see this happening in the series. Great job!