I like it. Normally, I would care if it was OOC or something like that. But this story is really nice. James needs his sunshine and Lily needs her rain.

amazing! this story is so sweet, but not sickly-sweet... just right! keep up the good work!

yeah, you're right, rather sappy and quite ooc, but i liked it anyway! the rain/sunshine metaphor is especially effective.
i love james/lily stories! they're so cute.

I like it. I like it a lot! I think it works with Lily and James, but it could also work with Harry and Ginny...

Really cute. I like your style of the short words stating the actions.

That was AWESOME!

i thought that it was wonderful!! it was so sweet!! even though you didn't use complete sentences when they were talking, but that was cool!!

BL

I think they were the perfect couple to use... I mean, try and use this with Ron/Hermione and it doesn't work, does it? Well, I love it, but that may be because I'm a sucker for romance, but whatever. It's great!

that was great!
i really enjoyed it
lisa

I think they were the right couple to use! Thinking of other couples, I definetly think this was the best to use. I love it! It goes on my favorite's list *click*

:D Nice job!

aw it's not sappy it's CUTE! just leave it at that and it would be a cute little love story in itself.

I thought this story was cute. Hope you write more stuff later.