This is a terrific peek at everyone--I don't really subscribe to Nick/Greg, but it makes sense in context, and the note of hope at the end is particularly touching. I think, though, it's Warrick who gets to me the most. Poor guy.

This can so not be finished yet. I need more of it. The only thing I don't like is the Nick Greg pairing, but that's just my opinion. Keep it up and I'm lookin forward to the end of this story(if not already posted lemme look for it)

I read this story awhile ago before I really started to review. Since I could'nt write a story if you held a gun to my head, I didn't feel like I should review. Anyway I just read this story again and was so impressed with the wonderful job you did in defining the characters and capturing their needs and emotions. I loved the exchange between Sara and Nick, when he finally admitted that he was gay. The understanding and love between Nick and Sara was so touching. The love between Nick and Greg brought tears to my eyes. But the best was the conversation that Gil has with himself at the end of the story when he finally reaslises that he need to act on his feeling s with Sara. I guess what I'm saying is that I loved this story. thanks for sharing it with me. anne

This story is freakin' awesome. Please thank your sister for reccomending you on YTDAW!

I love the image of a moon hanging Grissom, while Sara stands below, and watches him adoringly. I like how you really really captured why I (and a lot of others) don't like Sophia. I knew that whole 'spider love' thing was just an act. I also totally agree with your Grissom's views on Catherine: "Catherine was always unabashedly vocal about herself, her troubles, and her opinions. Reading Sara's segment was so depressing. Warrick and Grissom's final paragraphs were the best. I found it very fitting that he would take Catherine's fantasy quote and apply it to his situation. I don't really read slash, so I'm not into the Nick/Greg ship, but I thought their story was really sweet too. This was such a great story. You have really good insight on all the characters.

Damn...I don't even know HOW I stumbled upon this story...too many beers I guess...but...it is wonderful. I love your characterizations. Overall, it is very well written. In fact, I recommended it over at YTDAW. Wow! I so look forward to future endeavors!

Thank you for an amazing story. I hope you do continue this piece.

WOW!! That was amazing. I hope you'll be writing more stories soon. I look forward to reading more from you!

God, it's a damn, amazing story! It's hard to me to find words to explain what I felt, and not only because english isn't my native language!
Your story is, on the first hand, weirdly very sad. I coudl feel bitterness emanating from them, especially Catherine, Warrick, Griss and Sara. On the other hand, you've finished it on a positive sentence, or so I guess! The only thing I regret, it's I don't have sequel to read. I'm not asking you for it, but your writing is so fluid, sweet and agreeable that it's hard to stop reading.
Well, very good work, I really love it, and hope you keep writing.

*Elialys*

Wow, this was really good. I enjoyed it tremendously. I wonder if you are going to write a sequel. Would love to see what happens between all of them.

Can I just say... WOW.

the characterization is to a T. I'm really impressed... too many people are superficial with their characterization, but you really do it well. good job.

I loved this story. You captured the voices and emotions of each member of the team beautifuly. From Catherine's hurt to Gil's sudden realisation of his love for Sara you nailed them. Oh, and I so love that you put Nicky and Greg together. They are perfect for each other and the relationship you showed us was so sweet and tender that I almost wept. Is there more to come? I do hope so. Great job! Hugs and stuff Lou:)

Wow...I'm pretty much speechless after this story...It is absolutely wonderful! Keep up the great writing!

That's a wonderful fic!
I hope you'll continue it though! :)