That was funny!

One thing though: please TRY to spell 'katamari' correctly.

BACON! DRUGS!

hehehehe!

That's funny! Good job!

~look behind you...

...What the F- was that?! XD
It was fookin' hilarious!! Why is it so hilarious?! *gonk*

...I like it. But since both chapters are so short, why didn't you just combine them and make a one-shot? Is it more dramatic to do it this way? Who knows...

this is one disturbingly hilarious story! but it gives reason to the dancing pandas and ducks in the intro to Katamari Damacy lol

This is probably a major factor in how Katamari began in the first place... :) (You know, how he got "drunk" and crashed everything...)

Dumb, ill written, and most of all, TOO SHORT. This was ** HILLARIOUS, and you barely exploited the idea. In short: ADD MORE

dont continue cuase this really sucks and isnt funny.

Ah! Language! xD Funny, I guess. ^^

I hope you die...

Okay, that was a bit rough. You seem to be a new writer, and you need a tip.

Don't pile two people speaking in a single paragraph.

Example of bad format: "Hi." said person 1. "How are you doing?" replied person 2.

Example of good format: "Hi." said person 1.

"How are you doing?" replied person 2.

It looks more professional and makes it easier to read.