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  rukawaiscool 10/6/06 . chapter 6 That's my favorite song! I wonder how Sasuke's voice is, hmn... I guess it's very deep and melancholic. Wow. Nice chapter. Update soon. |
| rukawaiscool 10/6/06 . chapter 5 CROSS DRESS! Whahahahaha very hillarious! I wonder if he'll do it, oh well till next chapter, sweetie! |
| Sasuke rocks 10/6/06 . chapter 5 Will he or will he not cross dress? THIS IS EXCITING! NICE! |
| rukawaiscool 10/6/06 . chapter 4 Poor Sasuke-kun. Always outclassed by Itachi. whenever, wherever. Ow... i just felt pity |
| rukawaiscool 10/6/06 . chapter 3 Nice one! It's a blind date! What i was expecting! Yes! |
| Sasuke rocks 10/6/06 . chapter 2 Wow ItaSakuSasu! NICE! WOWOWOWOW! Keep it up! |
| rukawaiscool 10/6/06 . chapter 2 Wow. She likes Itachi. I knew it... |
| rukawaiscool 10/6/06 . chapter 1 Yet another Sasu Saku... I think I'll be reading this one too... |
| Sasuke rocks 10/6/06 . chapter 1 Nice one! this is awesome high school setting and those matchmaking ideas! I wonder is this is an ItaSakuSasu. I love this! |
 CrAzY-SiLLy-Me 10/6/06 . chapter 7That was just too sweet for me to handle! X3 |
| maldita08 10/6/06 . chapter 7 okay, i really like your story but this part is a lil off, hinata-chan is too bold. |
| Heart's Door 10/5/06 . chapter 7 Neh... A bit disappointing. The story was going fine, but then you kind of rushed Sakura's feelings. She didn't have that much interest in Sasuke in the last chapter, and then all of a sudden she liked him. It didn't make much sense. I thought that the little "serenade" was really sweet, but you should have saved it for a later chapter. In the end, I wish you had kept the story at the pace you had had it before. With the little love triangle and Sasuke trying to get Sakura to like him. It seems like the victory is too soon to really be a victory. Like... The sudden spark of interest in Sakura doesn't go with the personality you gave her. Also, (not trying to nag. sorry.) you still need to work on the tenses a bit. Sometimes you're doing past tense, but then you switch to present tense. Tenses are tricky, but mostly it's like if you say "Sasuke murmured" you switched the tense in the next sentence by saing "as he eats his popcorn. It should be "murmured" with "ate" or "murmurs" and "eats". (the -ed changes the tense) I'm sorry. I'm not trying to be a know-it-all. :( I was really looking forward to this chapter. I'm sorry, but I was sorely disappointed... :( |
| Andrometamorphose 10/5/06 . chapter 7 this is so cute! keep it up! i LOVE it! |
| yukibozu 10/5/06 . chapter 7 aw... how sweet. :) UPDATE! |
| diet coffee 10/5/06 . chapter 7 Nice, real nice. haha, he must sing good, with that deep woice and all. Wait, does e have a deep voice? *shrugs* oh well, haha Izzy-chan |
