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| terriermon tamer 2007-06-22 ch 1,  | abusevery nice! interesting and well worded, keeps you in the story. |
| Ilko Skevuld 2007-02-16 ch 3, | abuseI know its been over a year, but i hope you finish this someday. I really like it. |
| BuBBLe Tea BaBe 2006-12-03 ch 2, | abusePlease...continue I really love this story so much! |
| BuBBLe Tea BaBe 2006-12-03 ch 3, | abuseYou have to continue this story it's just to awesome. |
| RogueGoddess007 2006-08-12 ch 3, | abuseI love the Darc/Lilia paring. They make a great couple. Hurry with the next chapter. |
| Capito Celcior 2006-01-10 ch 3, | abuseoh what a wonderful story. You should update. I love Arc the Lad 4, but I keep wondering why there is so little fanfiction on it? |
| Sable3733 2005-11-27 ch 3, | abuseOh wow! You totally read my mind. ^_^ The parts with Darc, particularly where he interacted with Lillia, were my favorite parts of the game. I'm so glad to see them expanded upon here. Besides, I like AUs, anyway! Your characterizations are good, no qualms there - but you should work on your grammar and writing style. Still, that's not going to stop me from reading. I can't wait to read more, so please don't abandon this! I look forward to updates; this fic is on my favorites list now. ^^ Chelsea. |
| BuBBLe Tea BaBe 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseyeah love darc anlillia continue...don't like the end of thgame tho...they should of kissed |
| shizuku90 2005-10-23 ch 3, | abuseOMG...I luv it...pls pls pls...contiue I really luv your this chapie keep up the gud work...pls update sonn... |
| Eddie Striker 2005-10-19 ch 2, | abuseReally cute story, but Lilia's a little bit too hyper and forward. But thats just my opinion. |
| Oracle Master the Defiled F... 2005-10-17 ch 2, | abuseSweet. Awkward Darc is very funny. Keep writing. Oracle Master |
| shizuku90 2005-10-17 ch 2, | abuseI WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPIN NEXT...BUT YOU ROCK ...PLS CONTIUE AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I MEAN YOU REALLY DESCRIBE DARC AND LILLIA SOO WEL AND MAN I LOVE THEROMANTIC PARTS...PEACE |
| shizuku90 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseOMG THIS STORY IS THE BEST STORY I EVER READED OF ARC I MEAN ...I SEARCHED AND SEARCHED FOR THE PERFECT LILLIA AND DARC FINFICTION AND I FOUND IT WOW I LOVE IT GOD PLS PLS PLS CONTIUE AND YOUR DOING GREAT I LOVE AND YOUR AT MY FAVORITES WINK WINK |
| Oracle Master the Defiled F... 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseA bit too direct and bordering on M-Rated. If you want to do a lemon you may as well change the rating and do it instead of screwing around like this. Am I being too harsh? Sorry. Keep Writing Oracle Master. |