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| Lainielove7 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Two suggestions: Space out the dialogue more so it is easier to read. Seperate the story into chapters so it keeps the attention of your readers longer. An amazing story from and amazing author! Great job!! Keep writing-your good at it! |
| Ziva 2007-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGREAT STORY! I love this movie and I love the chemistry between Grace and Oliver. I can actually see this happening. Great job! |
| Steeleafan 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseOH my GOD! I love you..This was amazing! I loved it write more of these ..please! |
| Queen of the Unknown 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe this only has four reviews, it's awesome! |
| miss mcGonagle 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was very sweet...I love Oliver/Grace and you wrote them so well! |
| SpookyT 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseooh i love this did you ever think of writing another chapter? |
| Margaret Henson 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful piece of work! I love the way you mixed your own stuff with the bits from the film. Had I not already seen the movie, I would never had known which was which. Fine job of giving Grace Farrell the whole spectrum of female emotion. She comes across as a complete woman with many dimensions. A + !! |
| RevSue 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseTerrific job! I loved this story ... you put so much into it! I really liked that you had them forgive Miss Hannigan and arrange for her to have a job, too ... managing a hotel and kicking out drunks! LOL Thanks! |