This chapter had me laughing so hard. With all the devil nurse stuff and all. Please please please tell me there will be more of the girl!

Ah, dear Nurse Ratchet herself!

Dark, but amusing at the same time... not sure why I found the part w/ the unblinking girl so funny but I did! (just so you know) Hope she returns - yeah, it's weird - but I feel she must have more page time!

Enjoyed this a lot, hope to see 3 up soon!

Your Partner In Crime,
-Scarlett

Damn trippy, girl!

But you know I like weird. Great lines! This was fun to read. More soon?

oh I like this you have captured Sands situation perfectly. You still have Sand's nature bit it's distorted you can't end this here please please carry on.

Haha. I love. And completely agree, just unwell :)