Haha. Oh, the irony. Very nicely put.

Uwaa, so sweet..)))

This is the best written Satoshi x Risa story I've ever read, and oh I wish you'd continued it!

Most stories about these two take place after Dark has already vanished, but he has not yet vanished in the manga, but only in the anime, so there is yet no decisive ending.

That Is why I've always wanted to read a fan-fiction about Satoshi and Risa that takes place very much during the time that Dark is present in the world. Your story covers this aspect, and it does so in a well written, in character way which is very, very rare and hard to find.

Well written as it is, I wish you had continued it. If you ever write another, more in depth story to these two, it would be a dream come true.

Why do people love oneshots? Nah, it was nice as it was. Good Luck with your other stories, not that you seem to need it. Hehe.

You know, it's true that Satoshi looks better without his glasses. Interesting play on the word "dark."

I like this story. - It was good.

wow! the 'illogical' thingy was great! and Satoshi's conclution of it was even greatero

it's not really Satorisa yet, isn't it? But the story was so smoth and they're really on their character. Great job!

I enjoy it very much Make me smile Satorisa ROCKS!

So cute! good job

LOL SOO CUTE LOVE IT!

nice .

I like it a lot.

HOW KAWAII! I'm a weird pairing fan, and this story is cool!

Have I told you howmuch I love your work? The characters are always perfectly written, and the stories are flawless. This was just beautiful. The descriptions were entrancing, and the idea itself is, contrary to what Satoshi would say, completely logical. Great job!

Avalon

I enjoyed it muchly, I must say. It wasn't overly sweet (which is good), and it was very well written. Personally I liked the theme of Illogic that ran through the piece.

Short and Sweet! Both characters are IC and I can see it happening!

Excellent job

Great writing, loved the last line. Story name, too.