 fizz 4/22/01 . chapter 1 hey, *sniiiiiiiiiffle* very very good stuff! I really enjoyed it, and the strongest point, I think, is that you did a very good job at handling the emotions in this piece without being overly sappy. Kudos! I'm not usually a Gabs and Joxer romantic, but I found this one surpassed my expectations. You also have a good writing style. Keep up the great work! -Fizz |