sorry for reveiwing without logging in. I'm too lazy... :P
But anyways, this so far is the BEST! It has humor and its full of suspense! I like it!
I'm waiting for the next chapter dahling! Keep it up!!

do any of you know about sweeney todd because if you do then what do you think of a haunted mansion xover with it cause im thinking of making a story of it and i need some peoples opinnion. well any who back to comenting i love the plot

i am dying to see what happened to madam leota this chappie is a real nail bitter

WHEN IS THE SEQUAL GONNA COME OUT?!

I like this story a lot! ^^ A few gaps here and there, but who cares?! I'm glad theres another Phantom manor writer out there! keep it up.

Great story so far. Keep up the good work. I like Ezra.

OMG! I love the Phantom Manor (even tho I've never been to DLP)! PLEASE UPDATE! It's so good. Very creative storyline! I wish I would have thought of that!

OMG. Update ASAP.

This is my favorite chapter so far! I'm being held in suspense! I hope Zeke turns out okay...
Just in case you were interested...I updated A TERRORible Haunting and added lots to Destiny. (The funny moments outweigh the dramatic.)
Keep up the great work, Wile. E! Hope you van update soon!

thats really good hope u had a good new yrs

Interesting story.

There were some funny parts in it, but I felt that the story was very rushed. Try adding some more details, and using different word choice; you have a great story going, and you just need to add some little extra things to make it even better!

Zeke is such a chivalerous man. ^_^ I liked how Leota could make the memory appear in the ballroom.
I last updated "A TERRORible Haunting" on the first of October. Not sure when the next update will be. I also cowrote a story with another HM fanficer. It's under the penname Jase Andrews and Aquarian Wolf and it's called "Love Never Dies, Even if you Try to Kill It". Both are found in my C2 Haunted Mansion archive. :)
Keep up the great work!

What an exciting chapter! I really like the character Daisy. Can't wait to see where Zeke and Hilary end up.
As for the comics, I honestly don't know if they'll be available in England. You'll probably have to order it from the Slave Labor Graphics website or from
Happy haunting!

The review for chapter 2 that I left got cut in half due to some error. I kept trying to leave another revew for ch. 2 to let you know, but it won't let me. I tried doing it anonymously and using a different penname. So, sorry this review for ch. 2 is going to be labeled as being for ch.1. :p

Anyway, what I was going to say before the computer so rudly tore up my note was this:
"Zeke found his ancestral manor, hidden in the middle of Texas, looming over the ghost town of Thunder Mesa, like a god being praised by his worshippers."
I LOVE that sentence!

Even after that anal-retentive review I left, you still admire my work?! Just kidding ^_^ (Thanks for saying that, by the way. *blushes* )
I can tell that your writing has matured and improved greatly. I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Keep up the great work, Wile E.!

Almost forgot... The Haunted Mansion comic book series comes out Oct. 26. It's based on the ride, not the movie, and is being done by Slave Labor Graphics.

Great chapter! I really like Ezra. Poor guy. His leg snapping off was a funny bit. Maybe not funny to him...:p
>> Zeke found his ancestral manor, hidden in the middle of Texas, looming over the ghost town of Thunder Mesa, like a god being praised by his worshippers.