Sad and cute at the same time, a very nice story. Billy was always my favorite character on the show, he's actually nicer than most of the Lost Boys, certainly he's better than Peter.. .

Peter Pan always struck me as needlessly cruel and extremely annoying, I think you captured his attitude pretty well, where he's amused that Billy is drowning. I don't think he can truly care or empathize with anyone. He thinks he's the greatest thing in the universe, and everyone else are his toys, to be played with or thrown away on a whim.

Poor Long Tom, you made him a very sympathetic and lovable character. Great job, keep up the good work!

This brings me back :3

This is a very good story, I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for writing it!

This one is so cute! I just love Long Tom as a halfling! Please keep writing more fics!

*Wails* So sad, so sweet! I'm so glad it had a happy ending, otherwise I'd be crying (I was very close too). This is such a cool story!

Lady BlackDragonFire v _ v

What a nice story.

Hehe very nice

awww. that was so sweet! well written and well thought out to. reading this totally made my day in the fan fiction sense.

I loved this story! It's a very unique look at things, and I really enjoyed it a lot! I hope you decide to do another!

Good story. Very unique perspective.