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Reviews For: XO

Rockin Moonbeam 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, I love your writing. There is a reason I hate Many Santos, even now--but you did such a great job writing that reason out! You're inspiring me to write my own Degrassi fic. Thank you :)
SammieFaye 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abusekool
XxBloodyxXxRomanticxX 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseO! Manny GOT OWNEDD! lol. I love this story. Nice Job
Kelly123 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abuseWhew, you had me nervous there for a second with the whole Cranny sex thing, but thank God for the last line! And Toby! I'm so glad you found a way to work him into this, the poor guy just gets overlooked so many times that i feel badly for him...though i honestly don't even like his character too much. But yeah, good job!
moirariordan 2006-01-14 ch 1,	abuseI'm not too sure how I feel about this yet. All three main characters, Ellie, Craig and Manny are all dead on in character, which is hard to do in a love triangle fic like this. Kudos on that. The whole thing is amazingly written. It was sharp and focused with just the right amount of awkwardness for a story about high school kids. It also went right to the jugular. Craig and Manny sex, then a Craig and Ellie coupling (I'm assuming that Craig and Ellie are dating by the holding hand thing), plus I loved your Marco and Jimmy cameos. The reason why I don't know how I feel about it yet is mostly -because- you went for the jugular. The quickness of everything that happened is making me uneasy, and the last couple of lines, the conversation between Manny and Toby was weird. Does Manny think that she and Craig are dating, season two style? Or is she just triumphing over a conquest? And I get the feeling that whatever is between Craig and Ellie is tentative and fragile, and Craig being Craig, there's a good chance that Ellie doesn't know about the Cranny sex. And that's a very bad thing, Crellie pairing wise. So I'm uneasy and worried about the whole thing. But that's good, really. I don't mean to say that the story isn't good, it's a compliment to say that it's making me uncomfortable, since the point of fiction is to invoke emotion of some kind. And yours is very good at that. So, coming to the end of this very long review, I will ask you: is this a one shot? It isn't marked as one, so I'm assuming they'll be more chapters. I hope there will be, and I can't wait to see where you'll take this. And also, kudos on taking a normally cliched plot that's been overdone on so many dramas that the concept of the love triangle will forever be associated with Dawson's Creek and soap operas and making it into a sincere, vivid piece of writing. Seriously, enough gushing. Great job. XD -MR
blankmind3 2006-01-14 ch 1,	abuseSO AWESOME! ADDING IT TO MY FAVORITES
Raspberry Requiem 2006-01-08 ch 1,	abuseThat story was better than what happened in the show. It just seems more like Manny and Craig.
hypnotised 2005-12-31 ch 1,	abuseI hate Crellie...I'm all about the Cranny =) But either way, this is a great story...I hope its not a oneshot, you should totally update it again!!
xxjordanleigh 2005-10-23 ch 1,	abusecrellie shall rule!! no doubt about it!! so, yeah...love it so far. gotta go. hope you update soon!!
Felicia 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh! I really like it so far! I love Crellie! please update soon..
Natalie S 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseawesome story! i really like it so far, i hope u update soon
Prettyladii 2005-10-16 ch 1,	abuseI love the story so far. Please write more soon!
swizzbeatz 2005-10-16 ch 1,	abuseMy mouth is open and it's probably going to stay open for a while...This isn't a one-shot is it? I hope not!

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