Extremely well-written and in character. I love how you have been able to explore the darker side of Sara.

This is great, wonderful and i can not wait to read the next part.

I hope you will write more chapters its a real good story!

omg! You have GOT to keep this going! It is FABULOUS! I just loved it. It gave me goose bumps. lol. I think it's fanstastic, PLEASE continue it!

I really like this , I love dark stories that involve Sara . And honestly it isn't that OOC , Good job and please contiunue !

Haylee-Bob

Very well written story about a very touchy subject. You did a great job. Looking forward to more.

Hi

Your fic sounds very interesting so far, I'm always sucker for anything dark that ends happily (hint, hint:) It would be nice if there was some more.

you should definitely continue, but if not still a good job!

That was amazing!I liked the dialogue between Grissom and Sara and I'm waiting for more.

An intriguing beginning. The subject matter is both thought provoking and likely to be touchy for several readers. Is Grissom handling the situation correctly? Or totally wrong? Is the threat real? Or did what could have been innocent musing between professionals who deal with the subject everyday get blown totally out of proportion? Only time and the author can tell.

This was really good. I hope there is more.

Jackie

I love dark-angst fic. And this one is really really great. You gotta continue this, please.

a.k.a LostNovember

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you have got to make this longer! i love it! i really do! it is dark and grissom has got to save her.

Sassy

Great piece and not so out of character. Please continue.

oh oh oh am i the first reviewer? i really like it, it was awesome. wow. sweet. i really like it. keep going. this is now my favorite among the thousands ive read, well maybe hundreds. but it really does rock.