how cute!
go catch Luffy, Zoro!! XD
I'm thinking now... Luffy and Zoro on one of this dance machines... really, really rare to find o.o

nah, I liked!

Yay! DDR~ *squee* XDD Loved it! Hope you write more!

OMG so adorable!
yay DDR... presuming thats what they were playing... since the game and all either way so cute... really cool how you combined DDR and ZoLu though,... wow yay! Zoro must feel so special right now... in a good way.

Aw man that was but brilliant, fantastic! :D

So cute. XD Good job ^.^

Wow! You write so well! The characterizations were wonderful and the imagery was just /gorgeous/!

^^

If there were some sort of Vampire weak to fluff, they'd be a big heap of ash on the floor.

So I hope you're happy, you've just killed all the vampires on the internet.

...or at least all the Mary-sue's on fanfiction.

Either way you get the crown of fluff and now must rule over all that is cute and bishe. Here is your crown, here is you sceptre.

See you at the next Council of Yaoi.

Nice. Just the right amount of sweet.

AW! This is so cute! It's fanfics from people like you and DigitalDreamer that get me started on Yaoi pairings like, ZoLu.
This is such a cute fic, though it made me blush, because DDR or whatever dance machine that was brings back an embarrassing memory. *blushes*
Anyway, awesome fic!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
~JoeyWheelersOnlySanFangal

This was so cute. The idea of Zoro on one of those dance machines did stirke me as amusing, but I can really see Luffy on one going at it like a lunatic.

Oh my goodness! That's so *cute*!

This was a cute story.

Oh! I think I read this on livejournal or something. Quite a while ago so I forgot. But this is so cute and sweet!! *glomps* Yay for ZoLu! Write more!

I LOVE THIS ! IT'S SOO GOOD! I never knew Luffy could dance, but he'll have to beat me if he wants to be the best! ( gets Luffy and starts danceing and they stop for water)Phu, he's good...need water( gets water and starts danceing again)YOU ROX MY SOX!