wow, i really like that, it detailed the whole story so nicely. i loved how each stanza was a different character or aspect of the story, and it rhymed too! _ what a charming poem.

Oh that was so sweet! What a great poem! I totally loved it! I liked how you had each one of the objects/people in the story have a line to say what their part was etc. I just thought it was really good and well-written. :)

very good.

What a cool poem you, put everyone there telling who they were.I like your stuff-God bless