Wow!That was a really well made poem ^^ Loved it!

Well... damn... XD

The first time I read this I didn't like it too much because I saw the end as consensual. But then on a second read-through I realized it was ambiguous, which made it all the more creepy.

Stream of consciousness fics are always so interesting.

Side note: I woulda said "Towns/hend," instead of "Town/shend."