Wow! This is really, really good, and I'm really, really confused! I read this a while ago, and I thought it was JackxRai. And then I read it again, and I was like, wait, no, it's JackxClay. So... It's JackxClay, right? I don't anymore.
Oh, and I love the line, "The sooner you're rejected, the sooner you can get back to concentrating on World Domination!" It's very... Wuya-ish.
Also, this is a one-shot? I think you should make a sequal or something. But that's just me. Sorry for babbling... ^^;;

All right.

Wait...Is this about Raimundo or Clay? Because at first you say
Raimundo but then you say "Cowboy" which reminds me of Clay.
Which one? This isn't to be rude it's just I'm a little confused.

Hey I'm new here. This is a preety good message board. The best I've seen. I also love the show! This is really good. I love it! Is there more than just this? I hope so. Update soon TamerTeera.

I liked it ^^ Can't wait until the next chapter. Jack and Wuya rock.

Cowboy had a mobile?
That last sentence made me go, "Wha-?"
But anyway, nice fic XD

Please tell me this is Jack/Clay. And please tell me there's more. ^.^ And, in answer to your missing punctuation question, FF.N is stoopid. XD

Woah those pairing so scare me! Plz dont do that ever again.

so wait...jack likes clay!? Or did I read this wrong? Thats so...I've never heard of that couple before...its kinda cute, now that I think about it ^^

Whoa. Shock-shock. I had expected this to me Rai/Jack. Clay/Jack scares me. A lot. D:

O NOES lol I wouldn't have guessed.

"You know," she said conversationally, "I visited your disgusting little mind the other day."

wait wait wait, lemmee guess, both Rai and Jack have crushes of Clay? Cause that's what it sounds like, and wow, never heard of Jack/Clay before... interesting. and kinda weird O_o I need to watch for that next time I see the show ^_^ I'm a Jack/Rai, or Rai/Clay fan, but this pairing is just too strange to ignore! It begs for some analysis... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!

that story was funny. I liked it Keep up the good work! :)

* She began to shout, going from quiet to frightening crescendo. "The sooner you're rejected, the sooner you can get back to concentrating on World Domination!" Jack fell over in shock, and stayed down on his back, bottom lip quivering. "Oh, don't be such a baby." Wuya floated off through the wall in disgust.* Why does Wuya have to always be so mean?!? And if Raimundo and Jack think similar things, then why would Jack be rejected? Wuya made Jack cry T.T (hands Jack a tissue) There, there…