... Creepy Hermione. Good story.

Azer

Whoa. That was really intense. I don't think I understand, however, I think that the writing was incredilby deep and passionate conveying the turbulent feelings of the characters. So, what I'm trying to say is, ovenbirds reading this. Well done!

i really liked it (;

Wow. Just...wow. You've actually...there are no words. This was a great story, fantastic. Amazing. You've managed to make one of JK Rowling's most beloved characters into a manipulative, insecurity-driven, bitter, hate-filled she devil. And I mean that in the best way possible. Only really good writers can actually do this, and only really great writers can do it well. While I agree with kArlITaLUna down there (I totally second a sequel) I don't think this was confusing at all. Seeing Hermione in this light is certainly something to unsettle avid worshippers of the book, but it really renews your faith in the meaning of fanfiction.

This is a really good story and I'm definately putting it into my favourites.

How did I miss this when I love hate!sex so much? It's *fantastic.* Sick and twisted and God, so SEXY. And so them, too, in a horrible way. :)

i think it's good... it discribes alot of relationships around my age, and dead on! keep writing!

Very good. YEah, they don't love each other... but the structure of the story was brilliant. EXCELLENT.

thats confusing

Quite amusing... and an interesting way to look at things

Erm... did she kill him, or what? I didn't get that *g*... anyway... I liked it!

Ronsreallove

I love your story! and I think this is my favorite song from Nickelback! great inspiration...

:)

i actuually really really liked this but like mabey u should also put Hermione. point of view.

wonderful story

I didn't undestand very well. I mean I liked the tone. But I did not really inderstand I mean Ron loves her? but he wont admit it and he wont let himself love her beacuse to her its just sex?. And Hermione loves him right? or why does she hate him? Maybe you should do a second part entirelly on Hermione's thoughts.