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| Hittocere 2008-08-02 ch 17,  | abuseI dunno what I could reply to this... its just so interesting. Please update soon, my head is killing me trying to figure out what all you've plotted and left hidden away between lines. Loved Zax seeing Vincent as Chaos. Oh and is the Death Penlty Vincent uses the same one as the one in Dirge of Cerberus? |
| flyery 2008-07-28 ch 17, | abuseI love how much detail you ave gone into here. The range of changes that you have and the technology and culture is all so complete that I am awed. Please update soon since the plot enthralls me as well. |
| blkwingangel 2008-07-22 ch 17, | abuseyou know, your sephiroth and cloud are walking the line between friendship and lovers. it's the same problem with naruto and sasuke. anyway! i apologize for reviewing so late. RL has intruded and i haven't been able to keep up for... a month it seems. i think, i'm apprehensive about when cloud finally remembers who sephiroth is. at the same time, i'm eager to see him blow up and run away XP and i can't wait till vincent finally catches up to cloud. i do so enjoy seeing their interaction with each other. they're too funny together. but the heartbreak for when he finally sees zax (zack fair!)... but it is lovely to see that you had updated! see you next time! |
| Ukitake-chan 2008-07-17 ch 17, | abuseWow, this story has me trapped. :) Happily might I say. The characterizations are some of the best I've seen for the FF7 fandom and the situations are in a catagory that I love. It's interesting though, I have to wonder, is the dark shadow that has shown up twice Sephiroth? The Planet did say that he was unstable. :( Hopefully Cloud will be able to sort that out later. :) So far I've really enjoyed reading this! I can't wait for you to update! :) Happy Writings! |
| RockBane 2008-07-09 ch 17, | abuseI wonder who's destroying those bases... |
| Burenda 2008-06-29 ch 17, | abuseWow, this is a really cool story. The plot, the pace, the characterization, the occasional and tasteful humor, your talent for keeping the readers on edge and entertained - it's all wonderfully written. It's been a long time since I've enjoyed a story as much as this one. I really look forward to reading more of it. Good work! |
| Unseen Watcher 2008-06-28 ch 17, | abuseHey there! Sorry for the wait. I've been in Texas with near nil net access for the past two months. Love the interplay between Cloud and Sephiroth. I like this view of Seph, for I like the character even if my /loser/ brother thinks he's evil and irredeemable (I type this while he sits by me. *smirk*)...Now he's making excuses. ^_~ Anyway, liked the Chocobos showing up. I'm getting rather fond of them. Anyway, thanks for the update! |
| DaughterofDeath 2008-06-25 ch 17, | abuseadd a new chapter |
| Shiva-iceflame 2008-06-25 ch 17, | abuseWow... This is great! |
| seasnake.756 2008-06-25 ch 17, | abusethe last part... vincent and Zax, I bet. good work from you again. |
| cloudstrifejen 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abuseFinally! A new chapter! *Mwah! Mwah! Mwah!* :blowing kisses: And Cloud is cuddly as ever! XD |
| AkaiXTsubasa 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abuseAh, I had a feeling those chocobos would be back. I'm really anticipating the meeting between Cloud and Zax. ^_^ I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you very much for updating! XD |
| Firehedgehog 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abuseohh... freaking lovely update |
| foxy cat13 2008-06-24 ch 16, | abusei really want to try out that name shouting session, i looked like fun |
| terracannon876 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abuseWow ... Cloud's been everywhere =O I liked the Chocobos in this chapter. White and black, eh. Thanks for the chapter~ |