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Reviews for: Turquoise Town
Liu Wei
2008-05-25 . chapter 5
Well, that was surprisingly entertaining. I'd thought the game references would lose their humor a couple of chapters in, but they kept me chuckling 'till this latest chapter. You'll have to rely on other things for the humor in the future, though. I'm looking forward to that. Random humor can only go so far.

So are you going for an epic adventure type story? It's probably going there anyway, with this being like an RPG...The story's nice in that aspect. Pacing could be a little faster, but then it could be my own preference...Ah well. Can't comment on writing style' I'm not the person to ask about that. xD
satoru-13
2008-05-10 . chapter 5
This story is cool!! I like how it's set in a game, with all the levels and jobs and option scrolls...xD I love Sanzo's paper fan!! It deals 40 times as much hp as a dagger...xD
mcr rules
2008-05-05 . chapter 5
i really like this. it reminds me of a cross between FF and blade dancer can not wait for the next one
KiyomoRi
2005-11-05 . chapter 4
Wahaha.. Nice idea! I'll be keeping an eyes on this piece of work. You deserve to have a round of applause for doing a good job with the originality! *audience applause* and the detailed scriptures written in every chapter! Do not run out of ideas! >_
Thea7Flower
2005-10-28 . chapter 1
This story is...uh...pretty strange...its just like a game. No offence, but it's nice. Though I've read better. Sorry if it may seem a little bit harsh on you. sweatdrop...=)
Saph-Am
2005-10-27 . chapter 4
*_* I'm seeing FFVI in my eyes! Haha...wonder what the monsters will be like... You've also mixed Ragnarok! Monk...can Sanzo heal? Doubtful...:D Haha...I'll be waiting for more chapters!

I don't wanna ask more questions in case ppl will read this before they read your story. Then the surprises won't get them...Alrighty! :D
Saph-Am
2005-10-24 . chapter 3
Huh? Oh...nothing...just decided to make another account...ahahaha...

Anyway...

Sugoi! An RPG game! So, it's in Pokemon gameboy format, isn't it? Wah...so kawaii! I'm so excited to read more of this! Wah...where'd you get the idea? It's too cool! Ne, are you going to apply the battle format where only a certain number of members from the party could fight for a time? That's so going to ** the four bishounens, especially Gojyo and Goku. ;) And, what level is Yanyan? What's the max level? In which level can the Saiyuki guys leave the place? Oh...so talkative...haha...caused by my excitement to read a fic that uses RPG games! I love RPG games! Woohoo!
ilovesaiyukithemost
2005-10-24 . chapter 3
This is just like watching a game! I can't believe it! This is such a unique idea because I've never seen this before! OMG! Hurry up and update and I'll give you a dedication to one of my Saiyuki stories that will soon be posted! It's called, 'The Legend of the Messenger'. If it's alright, please review when it gets posted, okay?
Sapphire-Ruby
2005-10-21 . chapter 2
Oh...umm...curiouzkatt-chan? this is saph-am...with another penname..-_-"

Wah...this story is cool! It still is blurry to me, for while I read the story, it seemed like I just missed a step at the stairs...I'm afraid I'm missing a point here...I just don't know what...

Ohh...you made Yanyan fall in love with the famous Genjo Sanzo! Aargh...he way you described their meeting made me want to see pictures of Sanzo again...amethyst eyes...*dreamy look*

Another one of your great stories, nee-chan! I'll be waiting for the next chapters!
StarComets04
2005-10-17 . chapter 1
Hey, I demand more chapters ^_^. Please continue, I liked this one!
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