Great story. It was even good the second time around!

The only fault is that you sometimes use words that don't fit the mood, really. Like when Zuko was being formal in his ceremony you used some slang.

In the end of the last chapter, Zuko was knocked unconscious and now he's up, wagnhht.

I enjoy Sokka's mortal terror at burned sausages.

lol SO Awkward. "He licked his palm."

A very interesting portrayal of Ozai. Well done.

This chapter seems kind of random. The two lovers went from being interested in each other to being enemies over nothing and then there's talk of him TAKING her and it just seems randomly placed.

I enjoy this story immensely, but it's filled with typos.

Some tidbits in here are very clever, like the ingredients in the healing paste.

Zuko seems pretty in-character. I believe I've read this story before, but I wanted to read it again, so I am~

that uncle Tang was nuts, (giggling under emotionless facade)

aw, i looked but i couldent find your Yugi-oh story

aw, ill reveiw your yu-gi-oh story if u reveiw mine

u need to explain things better because this is a good story, i loved the phrofecy, but there are some parts where i get lost and confused. have someone sit down and explain the legend and the readers will figure what it had to do with te stories themselves, dont leave us hanging or we wont understand

this chapter made no sence

are we gonna learn about this dark avatar legend?