 Lainia26 2005-12-30 . chapter 3sorry it's taken me so long to review, but this is my favorite chapter so far. i love the way you justified remus' reason for not defending snape as him being afraid the others would leave him. that makes a lot of sense, and i never really thought of it like that before.
by the way, you probably think i don't know how to capitalize but i honestly just don't feel like using the shift button. i promise i'm not stupid though. :) |
 greenfly 2005-11-01 . chapter 1Wow. This is certainly unusual. And very interesting. I do like what you've done here, the idea also. I think you've chosen it wonderfully.
Remus as earth - because he's always there, the smart one, the rock, the one they rely on.
Sirius as wind - always there, sometimes not noticeable, but it can grow in a second and become a powerful, dangerous force.
And of course, wind drives fire - James - strong and deadly, but shortlived... sob.
And Peter - water - trickling through fingers, slippery, uncatchable. Cowardly but sly.
This fic has made me think a lot, just by glancing at each chapter heading, and I like it more the more I read.
So I'm going to read on.
-Greenfly |
 Lainia26 2005-10-24 . chapter 2Very, very good so far. Your writing is amazing. Though I must say, I imagined Sirius as more of a "fire" type of person opposed to a "wind" type. But that's not important. Anyways, great job so far. Update soon! |