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Lainia26
2005-12-30 . chapter 3
sorry it's taken me so long to review, but this is my favorite chapter so far. i love the way you justified remus' reason for not defending snape as him being afraid the others would leave him. that makes a lot of sense, and i never really thought of it like that before.

by the way, you probably think i don't know how to capitalize but i honestly just don't feel like using the shift button. i promise i'm not stupid though. :)
greenfly
2005-11-12 . chapter 4
Wow. Impressive. I never pictured Peter like that before... But then again I never thought about him much at all... I like how you characterised him.
riduculouslyriddikulus
2005-11-07 . chapter 4
very interesting story...very cool!
greenfly
2005-11-02 . chapter 3
As I said before, I love it. Looking forward to Peter.
-Greenfly
greenfly
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
Wow. This is certainly unusual. And very interesting. I do like what you've done here, the idea also. I think you've chosen it wonderfully.
Remus as earth - because he's always there, the smart one, the rock, the one they rely on.
Sirius as wind - always there, sometimes not noticeable, but it can grow in a second and become a powerful, dangerous force.
And of course, wind drives fire - James - strong and deadly, but shortlived... sob.
And Peter - water - trickling through fingers, slippery, uncatchable. Cowardly but sly.
This fic has made me think a lot, just by glancing at each chapter heading, and I like it more the more I read.
So I'm going to read on.
-Greenfly
Lainia26
2005-10-24 . chapter 2
Very, very good so far. Your writing is amazing. Though I must say, I imagined Sirius as more of a "fire" type of person opposed to a "wind" type. But that's not important. Anyways, great job so far. Update soon!
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