Good, job.

Update soon, please!

This story is very interesting. The characters are well-developed, the dialogue is natural, and the pacing is well done. It's a pity this story didn't get past the third chapter.

That was really really good. I hope you decide to finish some day. I realize it's been a long while, and it's highly unlikely. However, I would still really love it if you did suddenly decide you wanted to continue it :)

Ahhh this is the kind of story I have been looking for!

Wow... I cried sooo hard that my eyes were puffy and red! Good thing I was reading this at night.

I hope you update this fic, and I hope professor Oak and others can see and understand how Gary feels. Oh Gary!(sob)

Great story, but do you really need to bash Misty so much in that last chapter? With pokemon number, with tha book, you made her look pathetic... with that oh-so-great-gary.

I just cant see, how it can be in Gary/Misty stories.

I know its kinda too late for review, this story is nearly as old is pokemon themselves :) I just felt like to write one

This story is so awesome! It made me cry. . .twice :( I hope you update :)

I realize it's some time since you wrote this but..I want you to know I really enjoy this story!
The way you write Gary just makes me want to read more. I wish you would continue this story, but I understand if you're not up for it.
Please do re-consider thou! :)

Overall great read! Lovely dark twist on life in the pokemon world ;P

please please please update!

This is amazing! Please update it soon!

Do you still have a draft? Anything? You seem to have left after early '08-this is too amazing of a story to end, I've read it two times and I'm probably going to read it again after this review.

So, please, if you have any sort of rough draft-upload it somewhere? Send me a summary of what happens? It's devastating to think that this wouldn't be updated anymore, ever. Please, please, tell me if you're still alive.

i feel horrible for gary.

and misty and gary's "relationship" is not getting any better.

great chapter(s) please continue to update. D

Gary's character just keeps getting more and more alluring...I absolutely am loving this fic, you can't stop now! I'm really hoping that you're still working on this fic, though you haven't updated in a while. I beg of you to continue on!

Plz keep writing this is a great story :)

Are you still interested in continuing this fic? Because I'll read it :) I like the characterization. You're quite talented with writing.