*cries* Awesomes story!! Sad though!!

man i just finished the first season of the new series with dr.9 and i found this fic a very warming way of looking at dr 10. Thank you!

i can just imagine what 9 would think of 10...in fact i think you got it very right:

"The ninth Doctor's eyebrow creased at the pizza box. "It feels... light."

The tenth Doctor cringed. "Yeah, about that..."

Number Nine looked into the box, and Number Ten quickly grabbed onto Rose's hand. Their hands knit together, not the way they did with his previous incarnation, but in a way that felt right all the same. "Get ready to run," he whispered into her ear.

"You ate the pizza!" the ninth Doctor said.

"Run!"

They ran.

LOL i completely love that bit, you're really good at getting the diolgue and forming something i can picture in my head. Thanks

This is amazing! It really shows what Rose must have felt like. Its a brilliant idea which has been written up really well. i love it!

Oh gosh. This was so great... thank you for sharing it!

I really enjoyed this. thanks for sharing it.

Wonderful story! I loved reading it.

Oh, you're good. You're very, very good.
This fic had me caught up in it right the way through. It was consistently in character, with brilliant humour and I couldn't find a single fault with the slang.
I think this is one of my favourite fics.
Just so, so perfect - thank you so much for writing it!

I really enjoyed this story, thanks!

Quite a nice fic. It was sad and wonderful. I loved the TARDIS bits. Well done over all! :)

This is beautiful. I found no issue with the slang, though I'm not British...thus I may not be the best judge. ;) I enjoyed this enough to stay up way past my bedtime. You should write some more (if you haven't already and I'm just too lazy to find out at the moment.) Brilliantly done.

oh wow! I loved this! The interaction between all the characters, You've got the Doc - number 9 - spot on! And number 10 is great! I can just imagine him being like that, and then the interaction between both docs and how you linked it so well with the past, i loved that! Great story!

grate story i ~almost~ cryed wich is a big achevment becuse i dont do the crying thing and making me almost cry is hard in its self so way to go

Kewlies. I'm Aussie and i didn't see anythin wrong with the British lingo. I really enjoyed it. SO sweet, especially the hurt that the 10th doctor felt. lovd it. keep up the good work!

Very good story, and fits very well into how I feel Rose would be reacting...

Look forward to more!