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| Jasra 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseVery funny story - shows tha childhood of Merlin and shows how a story about doing chores can be connected with the topic. A good comment to the off-topic story we have. |
| Deb-lil 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseFor a short little fic, that was nice and well written. It's flow was perfect--and it all eventually came back to the whole chore thing, which gave it a very poetic feel. I'm guessing this is the same Merlin from "Shadow Boxing". It's pretty cool to read about him as a kid. Nice work! ~Deb-lil still P.S I'm having a bit of an issue with opening "Shadow Boxing", only because my computer's evil. I'll probably get it within the week. That's why I haven't reviewed yet. Sorry. |