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Reviews For: Doing chores

Jasra
2005-11-07
ch 1,
abuseVery funny story - shows tha childhood of Merlin and shows how a story about doing chores can be connected with the topic. A good comment to the off-topic story we have.
Deb-lil
2005-10-24
ch 1,
abuseFor a short little fic, that was nice and well written. It's flow was perfect--and it all eventually came back to the whole chore thing, which gave it a very poetic feel.
I'm guessing this is the same Merlin from "Shadow Boxing". It's pretty cool to read about him as a kid. Nice work!
~Deb-lil still
P.S I'm having a bit of an issue with opening "Shadow Boxing", only because my computer's evil. I'll probably get it within the week. That's why I haven't reviewed yet. Sorry.
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