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| You-Can't-Catch-Me 2006-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so cute! |
| Edouine Everglot 2006-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOk, i am a huge fan of Maudeline Everglot (and her big poofy hair) so I think it's great that someone finally wrote a story about her. You kept her in character really well, and i liked that Victor and victoria named their baby after the corpse bride. i just wish you mentioned her hairdo more (sorry, i'm sorta obsessed with that hair!) |
| PlayerPiano 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this. Your prose moves along nicely and is quite easy to read, and your characterization is just *spot-on*. Nobody pays any attention to the more secondary characters in this fandom, so your fic was a real find. I love how you portrayed Maudeline--it's just perfect! Everybody's in character, even just by being mentioned. Brilliant. I hope you write more Corpse Bride pieces. |
| The Tall Violets 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseNice.. i like the way you constructed this story with the connection between Maudeline and Emily, it's humourous yet aspiring. Is there going to be a sequel? |
| Chaos-CAT1 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseYeesh >>;; poor little Emily XD I'd hate to be in her shoes. I had an idea for a story in which Victors daughter is named after Emily XD must be popular or something, anyways, good story. |
| foxer 2005-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was good. makes one to read more on Emily (V&V's daughter) and perhaps her new baby brother or sister? |
| Weetzie06 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. You took a risk with the Emily character, but it was executed so well! Keep writing lovely fics. |
| Jasper Corel 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat concept! And very in character. Love the part about 'Daddy' fainting. :D |