That was so cute!

Ok, i am a huge fan of Maudeline Everglot (and her big poofy hair) so I think it's great that someone finally wrote a story about her. You kept her in character really well, and i liked that Victor and victoria named their baby after the corpse bride. i just wish you mentioned her hairdo more (sorry, i'm sorta obsessed with that hair!)

I absolutely loved this. Your prose moves along nicely and is quite easy to read, and your characterization is just *spot-on*. Nobody pays any attention to the more secondary characters in this fandom, so your fic was a real find. I love how you portrayed Maudeline--it's just perfect! Everybody's in character, even just by being mentioned.

Brilliant. I hope you write more Corpse Bride pieces.

Nice.. i like the way you constructed this story with the connection between Maudeline and Emily, it's humourous yet aspiring. Is there going to be a sequel?

Yeesh >>;; poor little Emily XD I'd hate to be in her shoes. I had an idea for a story in which Victors daughter is named after Emily XD must be popular or something, anyways, good story.

this was good. makes one to read more on Emily (V&V's daughter) and perhaps her new baby brother or sister?

I really enjoyed this. You took a risk with the Emily character, but it was executed so well! Keep writing lovely fics.

Great concept! And very in character. Love the part about 'Daddy' fainting. :D