I really enjoyed this chapter. It set the lighthearted tone really well and I love the concept of the two of them going out to dinner together. Their exchange with Ash and Misty was rather humorous. :D I look forward to reading the rest of this.

it wus gud untl thay got maried

Just one question? Didn't the Meowth balloon sinked down with the boat in a eariler chapter? Just wondering. I guess they always had a spare due to always begin blasted away by somebody!

Very odd...but I really enjoyed it. I love the way you write their characters! Your Author's Notes were somewhat amusing too.

...why in god's name is there part of a sailor moon crossover pokemon in a rocketshippy?

The West Side Story insert was great, it was totally in Jessie's character!

"And I pity any girl who isn't me today"

A mixed up jumble of cuteness that I really liked! Huzzah!

This was great! There were so many parts in this story that just made me laugh so much! For example…

When you suddenly entered that whole “Albuquerque” dialogue! That was so hilarious, and you were able to make it fit in so well! Weird Al rocks!

"I like shorts. They are cool and comfy to wear." I laughed so much when I saw this! I love playing the Pokémon games, and I recognised this line straight away!

‘Then Slowking came and said, "I could use some pants!"’ – I laugh about this line from Pokemon 20 all the time! It’s so stupid!

‘"No, $9,9," James corrected him, "We can’t carry more than that, remember?"’ – another gag from the Pokémon games! SO funny!

‘Unfortunately, the cook was taking a break, so they had to leave.’ – Yep, recognise this one too! I mean, how annoying is it? Wouldn’t the game have been so much cooler if you could go and buy like, a pizza, or a plate of spaghetti or something?

And also – the part where you imitated The Sims… I LOVED IT! You were really able to capture trivial parts of our lives and make them humorous, and for that I commend you!

Anyway, well done on a good story. I do, however think that you should have made it a little less serious (eg. with all the soppy love stuff.) Don’t get me wrong – I’m a MAJOR rocketshipper, but because you included so much blatant satire, I think that it should have been a tad more light-hearted in the romance department.

Ciao! BansheeGirl.

_I loved it_I love rocketshippy fics!and yours os one of hte best!

ROTFL!

HAHAHAHA ahem.

We! I luv this fic!

I think it would make a very good doujinshi(did I spell that right?)manga.

I'm high on caffiene at the moment, as always, so I will spare you from my jibberish. ?What was the whole Sailor Moon dream sequence thing? Gah, I don't care. It's a good ficcie.

Noooo YOU CAN'T END IT SO SOON! I FORBID YOU! NOOOOooooo. LOVED the Sears thing you put it. That was funny! I as well play neopes. This has to be one of the best J&J fics I've read!

I'm not quite done readin but I couldn't help but review. THE SIMS! I had burst out laughing and my mom stared at me like I was crazy...

Very cute, rocketshippy, and funny! I compliment the writer on making a story that isn't too mushy, it's romantic, and it is funny at the same time!

Gack, I can\'t sign in. But look! Look! ::points and waves frantically:: Have you

looked yet? I\'m reviewing one of your stories! And I put in a plug for it in my profile,

so nya. Don\'t yell at me anymore. Anyway, I found an interesting fragmented sentence

in the beginning of the story: \"Jessie stood up. From her chair and so did James.\" Fix it!

It bothers me much! It\'s at the bottom of the first chapter. And I agree and think that

you should call it \'Picture Perfect\' _ I\'ll shut up now. But I reviewed!

P.S. Everybody should read Peter The Wonder Bunny. Thank you _

Ooops! That last one's me too, but I just realized I should use my full FF.net name, blackswan15, not just blackswan. Anyway, now you get another review: I melted at the shippyness and laughed at the weasles!