Masterful, romantic and sexy.

I liked this very much. The fun, rhythmic language of it really adds to the experience. Of course the whole Quistis-yuri aspect doesn't hurt either.

This is lovely! A little hard to read sometimes, so I find myself sitting in front of my computer reading out loud. Then it made perfect sense!

A brain fart? I wish my brain farts were this good...
I usually end up staring at a wall.

I like the pairing and how you portray it. (although my fave is quistis/selphie) This story is deep and the sentences some would find weird make me feel as if it is an allusion to literature. Probably Alice In Wonderland.

In other words, I like it! It's different, not just drabbles.

Strange writing... though I think it was good? I love the pairing the most!

whoa
that fic was awesome!
now i wanna play the game