that's really cool!

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write more please!

Sweet ass story very dark and demeening. just like me! this was a very good story if u continue it wil be a very good series but u wont being it was a trilogy but anyway good story

really good please write more if you are going to write more. its really good...wait i already said that

Wow, that was great! So, Peter was evil, hm? People named Peter always seem to be in the Harry Potter books :) It seemed to me that it was a bit too easy for Harry to capture Peter, but besides that, this was excellent. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

Hmmm, magic twine, huh? Good idea, makes me think of those "thin cords" Lupin used to bind Pettigrew. Well, after you seee the mummy Returns, you will be really inspired, I bet.

This was great, and had some great ideas, my favotrite still being the Colare thing. I hope it will resurface soon, and I'm wondering whether Peter Randel won't come back too.

(PS, thans for leting the ending be a surprise to me too!)

I think this is a really interesting story, and i kinda hope you'll do some kind of sequel/spin off from it. The color thing is really cool, I can so identify with that. And HArry at the end really scares me. I mean a lot of people make Harry dramtically scary, but this is just so... believeable! Can't wait for the next!

keep writing love the story

DO NOT MAKE HIM EVIL, YOU WICKED GIRL although the colour thing is an excelent term. i congragulate (or how ever you spell it) you on this story you are a very good writer!

Ooooh, this is great! I can't wait until next week! Please finish it soon, this is fantastic!

Weird, freaky, but, above all, quite COOL! Congrats on this, it's really good! Gryff

Very creepy and cool. Course you're not actually going to make Harry evil are you? ::looks suspiciously at author:: Nice writing style anyway and I can't wait for the next part.

Ohhh, i absolutly hate you for leaving that cliffhanger. Who is it? You had better tell us next chapter.

Maybe FF.N will accept this, this time. OK, I think you''ve got a nice start here, descriptions are good,drama is good but not melodramatic. I'm looking forward to reading more, soon I hope!