 SnowsongIsAJaypawFan 2009-11-03 . chapter 16:) |
 XxAlysxX 2009-10-15 . chapter 12Kill Anzu YES! |
 blue-blueberry 2009-08-28 . chapter 16this story is amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter. |
 koryssa-kory- 2009-08-04 . chapter 16...more? ^_^ |
 Wolf-Ookami-chan 2009-07-10 . chapter 16guess you left this fic, since you haven't uploaded anything in a YEAR!
it was a good fic |
 Kyashii 2009-06-26 . chapter 16GAH! CLIFFIE! Such a terrible...!
-ly well written chapter!! T_T Does Bakura love Yugi? Will he at least say he does? I know you can't answer because that would spoil it, but I'm hopelessly addicted to this story. Thank you very much for writing and posting it on here for all of us to read!!
All the characters are very IC (in character), I'm thrilled to inform you. I love how sexy and passionate Yugi and Bakura's lovemaking is! I like that you don't have Yugi call him "'Kura" too much. :D Forgive me, it's just that I love the ring that "Bakura" has~.
It is very easy to see the characters developing and responding to one another, and also to see them discover themselves...and sometimes feel like they've lost themselves. Perfect example: Yugi and Bakura. They care very deeply for each other, but Yugi is afraid of what Bakura thinks of him (thanks to the last chapter), and Bakura doesn't know what to feel. I would like for those two (as well as the other respective couples, of course) to come to grips with their feelings and be together forever. :]] How cheesey is that? I don't care! 'Tis the truth~~.
I'm overjoyed that Bakura, and Ryou for that matter, aren't total saps. AWESOME-NESS IS THIS STORY!
P.S. Don't worry about that year long hiatus you took--I'm also guilty of not updating my fics. -_-* Thanks so much again!
~Kyashii~ |
 Kyashii 2009-06-26 . chapter 2...!
Ah..!!
KYA! SMEXAY! X3 I usually wait to review at that last chapter, but this was too good!! Crazy good job on the lemon!! <3 HEARTS! |
 kyoxairi 2009-06-21 . chapter 16Kudos!! I think what I liked most about this chapter is how it was more Bakura-centric. I really like fics that alternate between chapters on which character to focus on more, nice job!! I also love how wonderfully you've kept all characters well, in character, with how long this fic is, it's utterly amazing!! I'll be sad when this fic finally ends, but I guess all good things must come to an end eventually. Excellently done!! |
 kyoxairi 2009-06-21 . chapter 15Oh honey, you deserve the love-filled reviews of all your readers, no flames!! Yay Marik and Bakura for the comic relief, it's hilarious!!
I was so in love with this fic back when I didn't have an account so I couldn't alert it so I kept searching for over a year for new update. It's been about 2 years since my cousin told me to read this, so I'm extremely glad that I had the muse tonight to look this up again!! Thank you so much!!
But from your work load, I don't blame you for not updating, reality should always come first, even if fanfiction is sometimes more fun!! |
 Gabriel and Adin 2009-06-01 . chapter 16no! u need 2 update! it's been almost a year adn this story is f'n amazing. i luv the plot and the characters and omg, i'm gonna shut up now. but yea, update, this story rox x) |
 atemuxyugilover 2009-04-25 . chapter 16Wow i love this story. i just read all the chapters. You just made Bakura x Yugi one of my fave shippings now |
 Obasan-Kitsune 2009-02-21 . chapter 16yami blew through the roof! wow, and Yugi NAILED him! that was so sweet! now Bakura has some sorting to do and Yami has to find hiself a chill-pill |
 baka egyptian 2009-01-15 . chapter 16Aw! The fangirl in me screams enthusiastically at the yaoiness. That said, I really have always liked this fic. There are just not enough Yugi/Bakura fics out there, and this one has been written quite nicely in my opinion. |
 CosmicEssence 2009-01-06 . chapter 16Woah! nice little chapter!
"WE're nearing the end people!" DONT say that! While i do want this finished i cant imagine never getting another update on this ever again XD
You make me laugh you do both in the fic AND in your replies: so you knew i'd like that imperfect creature bit huh? well i glad im so predictable :P Sorry about making you separate your separations I do try to order these things somewhat but it doesnt always work you know.
Right then:
The end bit, where they finally say something is perfect place to stop by the way. Bakura's 'prioritizing' fits him like a charm. I mean it makes sense for the same reason you gave, he's a thief and REALLY old and had some major experiences so he needs some sort of 'instinct'. So the priorities thing really works i think, it also makes for some interesting thoughts from him about his whole summary of the previous chapter.
This bit proper made me laugh. I think it was the whole idea that if any one could get themselves to 'shut up' for 'priority sake' it would be him...its just funny is all "... forced every foreign emotion that came with the word “love” being directed at him to shut up so he could think." ^_^
I do like, alot, how we've gotten his perspective from the last chapter in this way and how at first he's immediately looking out for number one (that means himself) right up to the point where he sees Yugi and then its like 'number one point 5' are main priorities (thats him and yugi combined by the way :P). Course then he realises that Yugi's not gonna wait around and mayb go back to him for a fuck but in fact needs to be part of the 'getaway plan' so then its like Number 1 & 2 combined...does that make sense. well it does to me HA
The shoulder grab, i was just nitpicking that i think. It doesnt really matter and you said many reached out for him...somethings are better left to ambiguity afterall. And looking forward to whatever you have planned for the violent blondes.
Anyway, the 'not to walk away' line was intense and still showing Bakura's denial in all the right ways, and his stressing over the 'love' word is brilliant and really get u into his head (plus it sounds precisely as you might expect the series Bakura to react -a bonus!- if it was something they'd included which it isnt but meh..) and yeah what else can i say, its going beautifully...you sound like you know what your're doing (as always) and while i'm hoping we've still got a few more chapters still to go i'll read them whatever! Though getting out of the universe youve created might be hard to do once its over mind :P |
 Stray Neko 2009-01-04 . chapter 16Ahaha! I just love this story. :]
Thanks so much for updating. I'm really curious as to what will happen next. |