Well how do you reply to perfection? How do I reply to this? It's beautiful. Simple and sweet. The words between the words are so amazing. (Does that make any kind of sense?) Very clever.

...And then one of them died for her. Oh, the pain. This was abstract, but it worked.

wow! That was wonderful! Describes both Logan and Zack so well! And I think you really capture the dynamic between both characters and Max.

Me likes this. When Zack's around she really is caught between her undefined feelings for one and her gray area feelings for the other. Good work!

vety, vety, good. I like. Vety... I don't know the word ::sighs frustatedly:: deep? I just stick with good, vety good.

Oooo! I like!

that was wonderful. really nice insight into Max.

omg that was great!..)

oooookay... righty'o then...*-*

I usually really dislike poetry, but I actually really enjoyed this one. Nice work! I espically liked the last 3 lines.

excellent! keep it up!

Nice way of describing the differences and similarities between Zack and Logan. Very effective!

Awwwwww! Very touching. Great work! ::sniffle:: -LadyCallie

Very moving...I think you got what's exactly in Max's psyche. Great job!

WOW! I really like this...I never thought of it this way before!