Hilarious, but the lack of resolution bugs me a little. It seems like he should still end up with Kasumi if anyone based on how things worked out.

I vaguely remember reading a couple of things that were similar to this. The first one was a total lemon, where everything was focused on the sex, but the other one is what really seemed familiar. It was some crossover story with Ranma and Sailor Moon, and Happy used the point (pressure point, not burning) on Tuxedo Mask. I wish I could remember what that story was, as I'm pretty sure it was really funny. Oh well.

While I want to say 'good job' on this, I'm really not happy with how it ended. Ideally, Ranma and Kasumi would have stayed together with the possibility of Nabiki as well (either as a permanent member, or a temp friends-with-benefits) or just for a while until she found someone else. This really seemed to end with Ranma somewhat getting back together with Akane, which is lame, especially with how beaten up Ranma was afterward (with no signs of having enjoyed it)...

All i have to say is LEMON'S please. Make some chapter's with lemony goodness.

poor Ranma he ain't no pervert!

I believe that this story was a god among fanfics. Although it didn't get me going like "Twilight" it is a work of art.

Well that was a very abrupt and stunning ending... didn't see that coming. I mean sure you could think Akane might have come back to Ranma but to come in and essentially rape him? That and she likes it rough, damn! Well... I'm not gonna say this was a good or bad fic. It was different... I don't so much like Ranma + Akane pairings. But, at least it wasn't a Ranma + Shampoo those are as bad as Ranma + Kodachi.

Funny story

Really nice fic... too bad its short. Liked everything bout it except the last chapter... probably because i don't like Ranma with Akane... and prefer Kasumi or Nabiki. Hope you make a sequel without Ranma/Akane... if it is, i probably won't read it... oh well... it was a good short read...

Good stuff. I think your writing has improved a fair bit, that's the impression I'm getting from my memories of earlier readings.

The chapters were all good except for this one. Chapter 10 should be the worst OOC I have ever read. It could have been a much more interesting story, but this story fails to amuse me. Akane's personality falls much below her original character. Despite her violent temper and tomboy character, she is a good, positive, sweet girl and would never, I repeat, NEVER do something to personally and intimatly harm someone else in any way.

The other chapters were good 8/10s, but chapter 10 is horribly done, the only good thing is the grammar, and of course drama is needed in a regular story, but you musn't ruin the character's personality, which is a fatal wound to your story.
I am not flaming I promise, but this story needs some bad fixing. Overall, including the Akane rash, I give the story 4/10.

Have a good day

A sequel sounds good, but I'm pretty dissapointed with the way the story 'fellout' as you put it. This still remains one of my favorite Ranma fics though. I'll be checking out those new stories you posted now. I'm hoping to see your excellent quality of writing in those stories as well.

there has to be a sequal and sometimes girls do share a guy it happens in real life not often but it does happen i for one currently have two girlfriends the first got the second for me they are best friends and kasumi could make a thrid choice let ranma chose he has good incentive to not chose akane now with how abuseive she is even with sex

It's was entertaining...

Until the last chapter, when I felt that you slammed us into an Akane-shaped wall.

Sorry, but the amount of FAIL in the last bit destroy this fic.

It was an Akane'd cop-out, we all felt it.

Shame really.

Your writing is very well done and enjoyable to read. I've read your other fanfics and enjoyed them. I liked this one, overall, but at the end it started to break up for me. I like Kasumi, and had hoped Ranma would end up with her. I also like Nabiki and can SORTA see her trying to steal Ranma away. I can even see Akane's seduction. Not because it fits with the Akane in cannon, but more because the caricature that represents her in my head is such a huge bitch. My issue is really that the ending seems to make light of what was, essentially, rape. Ranma resisted the entire time, one of the sisters mentions him being tied and forced, yet no one considers it rape. That seems exceptionally sexist to me. Or maybe it's some sort of dark humor I'm just not getting. Whatever it is, it just seems fishy to me. Sorry about the spiel.

NED SEQUEL... PLEASE...