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| likkledibbun 2008-05-18 ch 1,  | abuse"It’s no big deal, though. I only owe you everything." Wow, that pretty much sums it up. |
| -the-coconut-bubble- 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, Nathaniel. He finally confesses. THIS is how the book should have ended, without the whole (tear-inducing) Bartimaeus monologue. Sigh. Well done. |
| Anime-Girl145 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuse*Cries* I feel so sad now because Nathaniel shouldn't have died. I mean, I hated him in the second book and some of the third but... the ending was so sad. Well, I love this fanfic. Good job |
| GreyKitten 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle* *wipes tear away* I always hated nathaniel, he was evil, but that was sosweet, you made him seem like he had a soul, and was repenting his sins in the next life. Cudos to you! *claps hands* Woot! U rock! |
| timidhinata 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuse*bows to your greatness* I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy! Love your fic so much^_^!! |
| ValkyrieRavenfeather 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseGood work. It's nice to see one of these written from Nathaniel's POV instead of Bartimaeus's or Kitty's. It's very well-written, too. |
| jessie 2006-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked this alot i finshed reading it. i creid, im still crying, andstill will jonathan stroiud shouldn't have kiled hjim off like tht. im pretty depresed. i loved this fanfiction so much. |
| InuMewMew 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI just finished the book today. HE DIES?! (crying uncontrollably). I loved Nathaniel, he can't die, he is supposed to stay with Kitty (still crying). Crap, that's not fair, anyway, you were the first person I read a fanfic from Bartimous, and I liked it, sorry but I had to get my anger out on someone. Once again, this is a cute monologue. |
| Cyberbanjo 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuse*sighs sadly* Great job with this. I just finished Ptomely's Gate tonight, and I'm still teary eyed about the ending (I spent about 10 minutes trying to find evidence of missing pages -_-; ). This was amazing. Sorry if I'm not that enthusiastic, but I really liked this, even if I don't really show it. I'm gonna go cry now... |
| tanyart 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was stunning! Very well written and it was nothing short of what I expected it to be. Actually, quite the opposite. It made me sad all over again. Thank you for sharing your work. This is definately a fav. |
| Darth Sonic 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, what a great little fic! Keep up the good work ^_^! |
| Candelabra 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuse... ... Goes perfectly with Gratitude. I think I'm going to go and cry in a corner now. I've read too many depressing fics about Nathaniel's death ... |
| InuDani 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle* that... was soo awsome... -InuDani |
| Rachael 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseGeez, I keep on crying when I read these post ptolemy's gate fics. This was so sad! It was really good though, and really well done. Oh, by the way, I honestly can't decide which one I liked better: Ptolemy's Gate or A Game of Chess. I definitely liked your ending better. Just had to say that. |
| Rekhyt 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis story made me want to start crying all over again. You think you've finally gotten over it, but that's something that can't be done. So, in a teary sort of way, Congratulations! Although sad, I really liked it. |